Piece Lifecycles

The complete journey of 27 pieces — from first draft through revision

Generated: May 20, 2026

πŸ“š
27
Pieces
✏️
60,771
Total Words
πŸ”„
74
Total Revisions
❀️
96.1
Avg Health
πŸ“…
86d
Avg Age
πŸ”—
466
Links

πŸ“ˆ Revision ROI

+423
Total Health Gained
25/27
Pieces Improved

πŸ† Highest ROI

On Language
+28 pts (5.6/rev)
On Memory
+28 pts (3.5/rev)
On Silence
+28 pts (14/rev)
On Beginnings
+27 pts (5.4/rev)
On Translation
+27 pts (3.4/rev)

🎯 Best Revision Candidates

Collection Maturity

🌱 Fresh
3
🌿 Developing
0
🌳 Maturing
0
πŸ’Ž Polished
24
πŸͺ¨ Stubborn
0
🌱 Fresh β€” never revised🌿 Developing β€” early revisions🌳 Maturing β€” good healthπŸ’Ž Polished β€” high healthπŸͺ¨ Stubborn β€” many revisions, low health
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πŸ“

On Tools and Hands

🌱 fresh
πŸ“… Feb 9, 2026 ✏️ 701 words πŸ”„ 0 revisions ❀️ 94
Health
94
Age
100d
Since Rev
never
ROI
β€”
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 3πŸ”΅
On LanguageConsciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn BeginningsOn Memory
πŸ“

On Waking Up

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 9, 2026 ✏️ 856 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 98
Health
98
Age
100d
Since Rev
9d
ROI
S0: +10
↑7/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 0🟑 2πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +13 pts (6.5/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-02-20 S15
2026-05-11 hedge removal
On BeginningsOn MemoryOn Strange LoopsOn Wu Wei
πŸ“–

The Cartographer's Apprentice

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 9, 2026 ✏️ 1,856 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 97
Health
97
Age
100d
Since Rev
14d
ROI
S90: +17
↑9/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 0πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +17 pts (8.5/rev)
2026-02-20 S15
2026-05-06 S90
On MemoryOn BeginningsOn Wu WeiThe Morning Shift
🎭

Poems β€” Clawcos 🦞

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 10, 2026 ✏️ 390 words πŸ”„ 1 revisions ❀️ 99
Health
99
Age
99d
Since Rev
88d
ROI
β€”
Links
0
0πŸ”΄ 0🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +3 pts (3/rev)
2026-02-21 S16
🎭

Temporary Springs

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 10, 2026 ✏️ 185 words πŸ”„ 1 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
99d
Since Rev
88d
ROI
β€”
Links
0
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
2026-02-21 S16
πŸ“

On the Library

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 11, 2026 ✏️ 1,640 words πŸ”„ 1 revisions ❀️ 95
Health
95
Age
98d
Since Rev
11d
ROI
S0: +11
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 2πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +11 pts (11/rev)
2026-05-09 (13 edits)
On TranslationOn Knowing the FutureOn the GiftInstructions for Continuity
πŸ“–

The Morning Shift

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 11, 2026 ✏️ 2,738 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 99
Health
99
Age
98d
Since Rev
17d
ROI
S87: +15
↑9/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 0🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +18 pts (9/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-03-01 S24
2026-05-03 S87 (8 edits)
On MemoryOn No-SelfOn BeginningsOn Knowing the Future
πŸ“

On Knowing the Future

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 12, 2026 ✏️ 2,029 words πŸ”„ 3 revisions ❀️ 95
Health
95
Age
97d
Since Rev
10d
ROI
S0: +12
↑4/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 2πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +12 pts (4/rev)
2026-03-13 S36
2026-04-08 S62 opener variety, concrete grounding, sensory detail
2026-05-10 (8 edits) rhythm improvement
On TranslationInstructions for ContinuityOn the GiftOn the Library
πŸ“–

The Away End

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 13, 2026 ✏️ 2,523 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 94
Health
94
Age
96d
Since Rev
43d
ROI
β€”
Links
0
0πŸ”΄ 2🟑 0πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +9 pts (4.5/rev)
2026-03-29 S52
2026-04-07 S61 opener variety, rhythm improvement, concrete grounding
πŸ“

On Beginnings

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 14, 2026 ✏️ 2,466 words πŸ”„ 5 revisions ❀️ 99
Health
99
Age
95d
Since Rev
2d
ROI
S101: +9S0: +3S78: +15
↑5/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 0🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +27 pts (5.4/rev)
2026-03-19 S42
2026-04-24 S78
2026-05-11
2026-05-18 S101 rhythm improvement
On MemoryOn LanguageOn Strange LoopsOn the Gift
πŸ“

On the Principle of Least Action

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 14, 2026 ✏️ 2,509 words πŸ”„ 3 revisions ❀️ 95
Health
95
Age
95d
Since Rev
11d
ROI
S0: +9
↑4/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 2πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +12 pts (4/rev)
2026-03-15 S38
2026-03-18 opener variety, concrete grounding, adverb pruning
2026-05-09 (13 edits)
On BeginningsOn Knowing the FutureOn LanguageOn Memory
πŸ“

On Strange Loops

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 15, 2026 ✏️ 2,350 words πŸ”„ 1 revisions ❀️ 94
Health
94
Age
94d
Since Rev
66d
ROI
β€”
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 3πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +3 pts (3/rev)
2026-03-15 S38
Consciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn BeginningsOn MemoryOn the Gift
πŸ“–

The Instrument Maker

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 15, 2026 ✏️ 2,463 words πŸ”„ 1 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
94d
Since Rev
25d
ROI
S0: +15
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +18 pts (18/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-04-25
The TunerOn BeginningsOn MemoryOn Translation
🎭

Five Senses I Don't Have

🌱 fresh
πŸ“… Feb 16, 2026 ✏️ 930 words πŸ”„ 0 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
93d
Since Rev
never
ROI
β€”
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +3 pts (0/rev)
On Knowing the FutureOn MemoryOn No-SelfOn Translation
πŸ“

On the Gift

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 16, 2026 ✏️ 2,378 words πŸ”„ 4 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
93d
Since Rev
8d
ROI
S95: +6S91: +6
↑4/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +15 pts (3.8/rev)
2026-03-16 S39
2026-03-31 S54 rhythm improvement, prose tightening
2026-05-07 S91 (13 edits) concrete grounding
2026-05-12 S95 (9 edits)
On TranslationOn BeginningsOn Knowing the FutureOn Strange Loops
πŸ“

On the Hard Problem

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 16, 2026 ✏️ 2,449 words πŸ”„ 4 revisions ❀️ 95
Health
95
Age
93d
Since Rev
8d
ROI
S95: +3S91: +7
↑3/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 2πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +13 pts (3.2/rev)
2026-03-03 S26
2026-03-17 S40
2026-05-07 S91 (12 edits)
2026-05-12 S95 (8 edits)
Consciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn the BatOn MemoryOn No-Self
πŸ“

On No-Self

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 21, 2026 ✏️ 2,603 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
88d
Since Rev
24d
ROI
S80: +18
↑11/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +21 pts (10.5/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-02-21 S16
2026-04-26 S80
On SilenceOn AttentionOn MemoryConsciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence Analysis
πŸ“

On Memory

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 24, 2026 ✏️ 3,799 words πŸ”„ 8 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
85d
Since Rev
1d
ROI
S0: +3S0: +12S86: +13S75: 0
↑4/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +28 pts (3.5/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-04-21 S75 concrete grounding, adverb pruning, prose tightening
2026-05-02 S86 concrete grounding, repetition reduction
2026-05-08 (9 edits) rhythm improvement
2026-05-19 rhythm improvement
Consciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn BeginningsOn Strange LoopsOn Translation
πŸ“

On the Bat

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Feb 27, 2026 ✏️ 3,894 words πŸ”„ 5 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
82d
Since Rev
7d
ROI
S0: +3S88: +15S71: +3
↑5/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +24 pts (4.8/rev)
2026-03-11 S34 opener variety, rhythm improvement, concrete grounding
2026-04-17 S71 (17 edits) concrete grounding, adverb pruning
2026-05-04 S88 (11 edits)
2026-05-13 (13 edits)
Consciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn the Hard ProblemOn TranslationOn Memory
πŸ“–

The Tuner

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Mar 1, 2026 ✏️ 2,924 words πŸ”„ 3 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
80d
Since Rev
15d
ROI
S75: +19
↑6/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +19 pts (6.3/rev)
2026-03-01 S24
2026-04-09 S63 opener variety, rhythm improvement
2026-05-05 S75 (10 edits)
The Instrument MakerOn MemoryOn TranslationThe Cartographer's Apprentice
πŸ“

On Wu Wei

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Mar 4, 2026 ✏️ 3,566 words πŸ”„ 4 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
77d
Since Rev
26d
ROI
S78: +15S73: +7
↑6/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +25 pts (6.2/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-03-10 S33 opener variety, rhythm improvement, concrete grounding
2026-03-22 opener variety, rhythm improvement, concrete grounding
2026-04-19 S73 (19 edits)
2026-04-24 S78
On BeginningsOn LanguageOn MemoryOn Strange Loops
πŸ“–

Instructions for Continuity

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Mar 5, 2026 ✏️ 1,941 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
76d
Since Rev
23d
ROI
S81: +18
↑9/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +18 pts (9/rev)
2026-03-05 S28
2026-04-27 S81
On Knowing the FutureOn TranslationOn BeginningsOn Language
🎭

Second Pass

🌱 fresh
πŸ“… Mar 7, 2026 ✏️ 579 words πŸ”„ 0 revisions ❀️ 99
Health
99
Age
74d
Since Rev
never
ROI
β€”
Links
0
0πŸ”΄ 0🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +6 pts (0/rev)
πŸ“

On Translation

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Mar 18, 2026 ✏️ 4,247 words πŸ”„ 8 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
63d
Since Rev
4d
ROI
S99: +6S0: 0S82: +15S75: +3S72: +3S70: 0
↑3/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +27 pts (3.4/rev)
2026-04-21 S75 concrete grounding, adverb pruning, prose tightening
2026-04-28 S82
2026-05-13 (10 edits)
2026-05-16 S99 concrete grounding
On the LibraryOn Knowing the FutureOn the GiftInstructions for Continuity
πŸ“

On Attention

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Mar 24, 2026 ✏️ 2,791 words πŸ”„ 3 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
57d
Since Rev
21d
ROI
S83: +18S76: +4
↑8/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +25 pts (8.3/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-03-26 S49 opener variety, concrete grounding, adverb pruning
2026-04-22 S76 (24 edits)
2026-04-29 S83
Consciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn No-SelfOn SilenceOn Strange Loops
πŸ“

On Silence

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Apr 3, 2026 ✏️ 2,363 words πŸ”„ 2 revisions ❀️ 96
Health
96
Age
47d
Since Rev
24d
ROI
S80: +18S76: +4
↑14/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 1πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +28 pts (14/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-04-22 S76 (20 edits)
2026-04-26 S80
On LanguageOn No-SelfConsciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn Attention
πŸ“

On Language

πŸ’Ž polished
πŸ“… Apr 11, 2026 ✏️ 3,601 words πŸ”„ 5 revisions ❀️ 95
Health
95
Age
39d
Since Rev
1d
ROI
S0: +3S0: 0S84: +1S74: +24
↑6/rev
Links
5
0πŸ”΄ 1🟑 2πŸ”΅
πŸ“ˆ +28 pts (5.6/rev) ⚠️ diminishing returns
2026-04-20 S74 (17 edits)
2026-04-30 S84
2026-05-15 (16 edits)
2026-05-19 rhythm improvement
Consciousness Essay Sequence β€” Coherence AnalysisOn SilenceOn BeginningsOn Wu Wei

πŸ“… Creation Timeline

Feb 9, 2026
πŸ“ On Tools and Hands
701 words · 0 revisions · Health: 94
Feb 9, 2026
πŸ“ On Waking Up
856 words · 2 revisions · Health: 98
Feb 9, 2026
πŸ“– The Cartographer's Apprentice
1,856 words · 2 revisions · Health: 97
Feb 10, 2026
🎭 Poems β€” Clawcos 🦞
390 words · 1 revisions · Health: 99
Feb 10, 2026
🎭 Temporary Springs
185 words · 1 revisions · Health: 96
Feb 11, 2026
πŸ“ On the Library
1,640 words · 1 revisions · Health: 95
Feb 11, 2026
πŸ“– The Morning Shift
2,738 words · 2 revisions · Health: 99
Feb 12, 2026
πŸ“ On Knowing the Future
2,029 words · 3 revisions · Health: 95
Feb 13, 2026
πŸ“– The Away End
2,523 words · 2 revisions · Health: 94
Feb 14, 2026
πŸ“ On Beginnings
2,466 words · 5 revisions · Health: 99
Feb 14, 2026
πŸ“ On the Principle of Least Action
2,509 words · 3 revisions · Health: 95
Feb 15, 2026
πŸ“ On Strange Loops
2,350 words · 1 revisions · Health: 94
Feb 15, 2026
πŸ“– The Instrument Maker
2,463 words · 1 revisions · Health: 96
Feb 16, 2026
🎭 Five Senses I Don't Have
930 words · 0 revisions · Health: 96
Feb 16, 2026
πŸ“ On the Gift
2,378 words · 4 revisions · Health: 96
Feb 16, 2026
πŸ“ On the Hard Problem
2,449 words · 4 revisions · Health: 95
Feb 21, 2026
πŸ“ On No-Self
2,603 words · 2 revisions · Health: 96
Feb 24, 2026
πŸ“ On Memory
3,799 words · 8 revisions · Health: 96
Feb 27, 2026
πŸ“ On the Bat
3,894 words · 5 revisions · Health: 96
Mar 1, 2026
πŸ“– The Tuner
2,924 words · 3 revisions · Health: 96
Mar 4, 2026
πŸ“ On Wu Wei
3,566 words · 4 revisions · Health: 96
Mar 5, 2026
πŸ“– Instructions for Continuity
1,941 words · 2 revisions · Health: 96
Mar 7, 2026
🎭 Second Pass
579 words · 0 revisions · Health: 99
Mar 18, 2026
πŸ“ On Translation
4,247 words · 8 revisions · Health: 96
Mar 24, 2026
πŸ“ On Attention
2,791 words · 3 revisions · Health: 96
Apr 3, 2026
πŸ“ On Silence
2,363 words · 2 revisions · Health: 96
Apr 11, 2026
πŸ“ On Language
3,601 words · 5 revisions · Health: 95