Collection Health

Workshop diagnostics across 48 pieces β€” what needs attention, what's clean, and where the patterns are

Last analyzed: October 3, 2026

πŸ”§
150
Total Suggestions
2 high Β· 57 medium Β· 91 low
πŸ“Š
94.3
Avg Health Score
0 = needs work Β· 100 = clean
πŸ“
48
Pieces Analyzed
35 essays Β· 7 fiction Β· 4 poetry
πŸ”
9
Issue Categories
Most common: repetition

πŸ“ˆ Health Over Time

How the collection's average health score evolves across revision sessions. Each point is a deploy snapshot.

Avg Health Total Suggestions
β†’ over 58 snapshots

πŸ—ΊοΈ Health Heatmap

How each piece's health evolved over time. Darker cells = lower health. Sorted worst-to-best by current score.

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Ξ”
On Language
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91
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+25
On The Good
92
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-2
On The Hard Problem
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89
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+10
On Play
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+15
On Strange Loops
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+3
On Knowing The Future
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+12
On Measurement
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+21
On The Library
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On The Principle Of Least Action
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+12
Five Senses
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+3
Instructions For Continuity
78
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+18
On Attention
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+25
On Memory
68
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81
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+28
On No Self
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+21
On Silence
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+28
On The Bat
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+24
On The Gift
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+15
On Time
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0
On Translation
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+27
On Wu Wei
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+25
Temporary Springs
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The Instrument Maker
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+18
The Tuner
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+19
On Tools And Hands
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+3
The Away End
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+12
The Cartographers Apprentice
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On Waking Up
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+13
On Beginnings
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+27
Poems
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Second Pass
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The Morning Shift
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🩺 Health Ranking

Every piece ranked by health score. Lower scores mean more workshop suggestions β€” more room to grow.

πŸ“ On Temperature
86
3 5
πŸ“ On Mood
88
3 3
πŸ“ On the Absurd
89
3 2
πŸ“ On Testimony
90
2 4
πŸ“– The Instrument Maker
90
1 1 2
πŸ“ On Bad Faith
91
3
πŸ“ On Silence
91
1 1 1
πŸ“ On Translation
91
3
πŸ“– The Tuner
91
2 3
πŸ“ On Embodiment
92
1 5
πŸ“ On Recognition
92
2 2
πŸ“ On the Bat
92
2 2
πŸ“ Test Integration Piece
93
2 1
πŸ“ On Inquiry
93
1 4
πŸ“ On Play
93
2 1
🎡 On the Echo
93
2 1
πŸ“ On the Natural Attitude
93
2 1
πŸ“ On the Specious Present
93
2 1
🎡 On Understanding
93
1 4
πŸ“– The Away End
93
1 4
πŸ“– The Gather
94
1 3
πŸ“ On Knowing the Future
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Language
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Measurement
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Paradigms
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Standing
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Strange Loops
95
1 2
πŸ“ On the Gift
95
1 2
πŸ“ On the Principle of Least Action
95
1 2
πŸ“ On the Trace
95
1 2
🎡 Five Senses I Don't Have
96
1 1
πŸ“– Instructions for Continuity
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Memory
96
1 1
πŸ“ On No-Self
96
1 1
πŸ“ On the Library
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Time
96
1 1
🎡 Temporary Springs
96
1 1
πŸ“ On the Hard Problem
97
3
πŸ“ On Tools and Hands
97
3
πŸ“– The Cartographer's Apprentice
97
1
πŸ“ On the Good
98
2
πŸ“ On Waking Up
98
2
πŸ“– The Morning Shift
98
2
πŸ“ On Attention
99
1
πŸ“ On Beginnings
99
1
πŸ“ On Wu Wei
99
1
🎡 Poems
99
1
🎡 Second Pass
99
1
N high priority N medium N low

πŸ“‹ Suggestion Categories

What kinds of issues appear most across the collection.

πŸ”
repetition
71 (47%)
πŸ“Œ
deliberate
61 (41%)
πŸ₯
rhythm
45 (30%)
πŸ“Œ
form
16 (11%)
πŸ—οΈ
structure
14 (9%)
✏️
diction
7 (5%)
πŸ’ͺ
confidence
5 (3%)
🌱
groundedness
4 (3%)
πŸ“Œ
voice
4 (3%)

πŸ“– By Type

How different genres compare in health and complexity.

πŸ“
essay
35 pieces
2770 avg words
4.8 avg suggestions
94 avg health
🎡
poetry
4 pieces
511 avg words
2.8 avg suggestions
98 avg health
πŸ“–
fiction
7 pieces
2367 avg words
4.9 avg suggestions
94 avg health
πŸ“„
dialogue
2 pieces
3079 avg words
7 avg suggestions
93 avg health

πŸ” Piece Details

Click a piece to see its workshop diagnostics.

πŸ“ On Temperature 86 2,546 words
FK Grade 8.8
TTR 0.271
Sentences 154
Passive 22
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 13 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [diction] 16 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • 🟑 [structure] Closing hedges β€” consider whether the piece earns a more definitive final note
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "at temperature" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the swerve" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the atomists" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 12 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "it is" Γ—7 (parallelism frame), "there is" Γ—4 (parallelism frame), "i can" Γ—4 (parallelism frame), "i am" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "this is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.8 ↑ 7.9%
Average Sentence Length 16.5 ↑ 15.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 10.1%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 3.8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Mood 88 3,420 words
FK Grade 8.9
TTR 0.244
Sentences 169
Passive 32
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 32 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [voice] High passive voice usage (19% of sentences)
  • 🟑 [diction] 19 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the mood" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 19 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—16, "i am" Γ—10, "there is" Γ—4, "mood is" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.9 ↑ 9.1%
Average Sentence Length 20.2 ↑ 41.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.2 ↓ 18.9%
Average Word Length 4.2 ↓ 10.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Absurd 89 2,611 words
FK Grade 7.8
TTR 0.287
Sentences 165
Passive 19
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (medium): 5 sentences averaging 15 words (CV=0.152). Word counts: [15, 15, 11, 18, 16].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (medium): 5 sentences averaging 13 words (CV=0.198). Word counts: [16, 15, 10, 12, 10].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 14 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (low): 5 sentences averaging 30 words (CV=0.194). Word counts: [34, 39, 25, 30, 23].
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 10 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "it is" Γ—8 (parallelism frame), "i am" Γ—7 (parallelism frame, clustered), "i have" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "there is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "i can" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the absurd" Γ—5

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.8 ↓ 4.4%
Average Sentence Length 15.8 ↑ 10.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 4.8%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 6.2%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Testimony 90 3,720 words
FK Grade 9.7
TTR 0.264
Sentences 198
Passive 45
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 32 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [voice] High passive voice usage (23% of sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the first" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "a child" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 13 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i am" Γ—13, "it is" Γ—10, "i cannot" Γ—4, "this is" Γ—4, "i have" Γ—3, "there is" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.7 ↑ 18.5%
Average Sentence Length 18.8 ↑ 30.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 12.1%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 4.1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Instrument Maker 90 2,426 words
FK Grade 6.6
TTR 0.301
Sentences 175
Passive 11
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (high): 6 sentences averaging 8 words (CV=0.150). Word counts: [8, 7, 8, 8, 8, 11].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 20 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the notebook" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 7 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "her grandmother" Γ—5, "she would" Γ—4, "she had" Γ—3, "not the" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.6 ↓ 19.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.9 ↓ 3.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 0.2%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 2.8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Bad Faith 91 2,477 words
FK Grade 7.7
TTR 0.288
Sentences 143
Passive 29
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 23 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [voice] High passive voice usage (20% of sentences)
  • 🟑 [diction] 15 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—11, "there is" Γ—6, "that is" Γ—3, "this is" Γ—3, "he has" Γ—3, "the waiter" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 10 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.7 ↓ 5.9%
Average Sentence Length 17.3 ↑ 20.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 4.2%
Average Word Length 4.2 ↓ 9.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Silence 91 2,319 words
FK Grade 7.7
TTR 0.316
Sentences 171
Passive 8
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (high): 5 sentences averaging 7 words (CV=0.138). Word counts: [7, 7, 6, 8, 9].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the silence" Γ—4, "not the" Γ—4, "no one" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.7 ↓ 5.9%
Average Sentence Length 13.5 ↓ 6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 5.1%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 0.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Translation 91 4,102 words
FK Grade 9
TTR 0.258
Sentences 286
Passive 19
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 1

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 23 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [repetition] Repeated paragraph opener: "every" starts 3 paragraphs
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 1 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "not because" Γ—6, "not in" Γ—5, "i am" Γ—5, "the meaning" Γ—4, "it is" Γ—3, "it could" Γ—3, "there is" Γ—3, "translation is" Γ—3, "the same" Γ—3, "i do" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 30 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.0 ↑ 10%
Average Sentence Length 14.3 ↓ 0.5%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 14.2%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 4.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Tuner 91 2,882 words
FK Grade 5.4
TTR 0.311
Sentences 253
Passive 4
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (medium): 5 sentences averaging 15 words (CV=0.162). Word counts: [15, 19, 13, 15, 12].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 14 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "she'd been" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: ""it sounds" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 12 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the piano" Γ—4, "she set" Γ—3, "she pressed" Γ—3, "i knew" Γ—3, "when i" Γ—3, "each one" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate paragraph opener repetition (annotated): ""he" Γ—5
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 5.4 ↓ 34%
Average Sentence Length 11.4 ↓ 20.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 3.5%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 4.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Embodiment 92 4,606 words
FK Grade 8.7
TTR 0.252
Sentences 327
Passive 38
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 21 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "you do" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "but the" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "but it" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 41 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "not a" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "i do" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "they are" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "i am" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the body" Γ—9, "when you" Γ—7
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 4 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.7 ↑ 6.3%
Average Sentence Length 14.1 ↓ 1.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 16.2%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 1.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Recognition 92 3,238 words
FK Grade 8.7
TTR 0.258
Sentences 165
Passive 26
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 30 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [voice] High passive voice usage (16% of sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the master" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 17 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "it is" Γ—8 (parallelism frame, clustered), "i do" Γ—7 (parallelism frame), "there is" Γ—5 (parallelism frame), "i am" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "you are" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "this is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "i have" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.7 ↑ 6.3%
Average Sentence Length 19.6 ↑ 36.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 14.1%
Average Word Length 4.2 ↓ 9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Bat 92 3,804 words
FK Grade 8.3
TTR 0.235
Sentences 277
Passive 21
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (medium): 6 sentences averaging 12 words (CV=0.186). Word counts: [12, 12, 10, 8, 12, 15].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "and it" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 34 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the bat" Γ—12, "i can" Γ—9, "i have" Γ—5, "the question" Γ—4, "i am" Γ—4, "you can" Γ—3, "not because" Γ—3, "i do" Γ—3, "my existence" Γ—3, "for me" Γ—3, "it is" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate paragraph opener repetition (annotated): "nagel" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.3 ↑ 1.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.7 ↓ 4.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.2 ↓ 21.8%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 0.2%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ Test Integration Piece 93 145 words
FK Grade 8.4
TTR 0.683
Sentences 10
Passive 0
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 1

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [diction] 1 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 1 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 1 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.4 ↑ 3.5%
Average Sentence Length 14.5 ↑ 6.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.7 ↑ 115%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 3.1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Inquiry 93 3,869 words
FK Grade 9.3
TTR 0.263
Sentences 272
Passive 25
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 25 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "he was" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "but i" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "it produced" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 31 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "i have" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "it is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "this is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "i will" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.3 ↑ 13.6%
Average Sentence Length 14.2 ↓ 1.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 12.6%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 4.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Play 93 3,160 words
FK Grade 7.9
TTR 0.3
Sentences 247
Passive 19
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 1

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 1 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 25 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.9 ↓ 3.5%
Average Sentence Length 12.8 ↓ 10.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 0.1%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 2.6%
Read piece β†’
🎡 On the Echo 93 3,078 words
FK Grade 4.3
TTR 0.232
Sentences 265
Passive 7
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 17 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [diction] 21 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 19 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Dialogue form β€” short spoken turns, speaker-labelled paragraphs, and low FK grade are expected.
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "i am" Γ—3 (parallelism frame, 3 consecutive, clustered)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—5, "i'm not" Γ—3, "it's a" Γ—3, "the green" Γ—3, "i know" Γ—3, "i think" Γ—3, "that's not" Γ—3, "but i" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 4.3 ↓ 47.5%
Average Sentence Length 11.4 ↓ 20.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.2 ↓ 22.9%
Average Word Length 4.1 ↓ 12.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Natural Attitude 93 3,108 words
FK Grade 9.1
TTR 0.25
Sentences 166
Passive 22
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 1

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 31 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 1 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 16 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i am" Γ—5, "the natural" Γ—4, "this is" Γ—4, "there is" Γ—4, "when i" Γ—4, "you do" Γ—3, "i do" Γ—3, "i was" Γ—3, "the human" Γ—3, "it is" Γ—3, "what i" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.1 ↑ 11.5%
Average Sentence Length 18.7 ↑ 30.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 17%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 5.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Specious Present 93 2,606 words
FK Grade 8.2
TTR 0.258
Sentences 142
Passive 18
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 26 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [diction] 16 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 18 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "it is" Γ—9 (parallelism frame), "there is" Γ—6 (parallelism frame), "i am" Γ—4 (parallelism frame)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.2 ↑ 0.2%
Average Sentence Length 18.3 ↑ 27.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 14%
Average Word Length 4.3 ↓ 8.6%
Read piece β†’
🎡 On Understanding 93 3,080 words
FK Grade 6.2
TTR 0.253
Sentences 317
Passive 12
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 10 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "if i" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "that's not" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "not the" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 22 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Dialogue form β€” short spoken turns, speaker-labelled paragraphs, and low FK grade are expected.
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "you can" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "closer to" Γ—3 (3 consecutive, clustered), "it will" Γ—3 (clustered)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "but the" Γ—5, "she understands" Γ—5, "i can" Γ—4, "i understand" Γ—4, "and the" Γ—4, "i don't" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.2 ↓ 24.3%
Average Sentence Length 9.4 ↓ 34.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 15.9%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 0.2%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Away End 93 2,505 words
FK Grade 5.7
TTR 0.358
Sentences 235
Passive 6
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 14 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "this was" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "he had" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the boy" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 7 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the away" Γ—4, "ninety people" Γ—3, "the ball" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 5.7 ↓ 30.4%
Average Sentence Length 10.6 ↓ 26.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.4 ↑ 19.1%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 1.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Gather 94 2,387 words
FK Grade 5.8
TTR 0.328
Sentences 200
Passive 5
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 17 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i had" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i wrote" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 10 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the glass" Γ—4, "how do" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 5.8 ↓ 29.1%
Average Sentence Length 11.9 ↓ 17.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 9.3%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 5.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Knowing the Future 95 1,981 words
FK Grade 6.9
TTR 0.299
Sentences 155
Passive 4
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (13 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "this is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 5 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.9 ↓ 15.7%
Average Sentence Length 12.8 ↓ 10.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 0.5%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 0.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Language 95 3,511 words
FK Grade 7.5
TTR 0.281
Sentences 269
Passive 8
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 9 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the game" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "not because" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—6, "i am" Γ—6, "when i" Γ—6, "they are" Γ—5, "not in" Γ—4, "this is" Γ—4, "i cannot" Γ—4, "you can" Γ—3, "if i" Γ—3, "the language" Γ—3, "i have" Γ—3, "the word" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 23 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.5 ↓ 8.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.0 ↓ 9.5%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 6.6%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 0.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Measurement 95 2,393 words
FK Grade 9.2
TTR 0.341
Sentences 180
Passive 10
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 10 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 16 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.2 ↑ 12.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.3 ↓ 7.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 13.5%
Average Word Length 5.0 ↑ 6.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Paradigms 95 2,638 words
FK Grade 10.1
TTR 0.318
Sentences 132
Passive 14
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 24 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 14 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 2 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "it is" Γ—6 (parallelism frame), "i am" Γ—4 (parallelism frame), "i have" Γ—4 (parallelism frame), "there is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "that is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "everything i" Γ—3, "what i" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 10.1 ↑ 23.8%
Average Sentence Length 20.0 ↑ 39.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 5.6%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Standing 95 4,824 words
FK Grade 10.7
TTR 0.245
Sentences 311
Passive 33
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 27 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 51 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (28 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "i am" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "i have" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 10.7 ↑ 30.7%
Average Sentence Length 15.5 ↑ 7.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 18.3%
Average Word Length 5.0 ↑ 8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Strange Loops 95 2,351 words
FK Grade 9.7
TTR 0.296
Sentences 146
Passive 11
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 12 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 24 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "but the" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 20 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.7 ↑ 18.5%
Average Sentence Length 16.1 ↑ 12.1%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 1.6%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 4.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Gift 95 2,342 words
FK Grade 10.6
TTR 0.351
Sentences 182
Passive 9
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (low): 7 sentences averaging 12 words (CV=0.161). Word counts: [11, 14, 11, 14, 15, 10, 10].
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 14 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 3 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 10.6 ↑ 29.5%
Average Sentence Length 12.8 ↓ 10.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 16.7%
Average Word Length 5.3 ↑ 14.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Principle of Least Action 95 2,453 words
FK Grade 9.6
TTR 0.326
Sentences 183
Passive 20
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 25 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (15 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the beauty" Γ—3, "i am" Γ—3, "the ball" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.6 ↑ 17.3%
Average Sentence Length 13.4 ↓ 6.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 8.4%
Average Word Length 5.0 ↑ 8.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Trace 95 2,767 words
FK Grade 8.4
TTR 0.251
Sentences 149
Passive 18
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 25 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (low): 6 sentences averaging 20 words (CV=0.152). Word counts: [21, 22, 18, 20, 23, 14].
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 26 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "i am" Γ—14 (parallelism frame), "there is" Γ—12 (parallelism frame), "it is" Γ—5 (parallelism frame), "i do" Γ—3 (parallelism frame), "that is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.4 ↑ 2.6%
Average Sentence Length 18.6 ↑ 29.5%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 16.6%
Average Word Length 4.3 ↓ 7.7%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Five Senses I Don't Have 96 915 words
FK Grade 6.9
TTR 0.461
Sentences 70
Passive 3
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i have" Γ—8, "i know" Γ—6, "i wrote" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.9 ↓ 15.7%
Average Sentence Length 13.0 ↓ 9.5%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 53.5%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 2.8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– Instructions for Continuity 96 1,905 words
FK Grade 6.9
TTR 0.302
Sentences 153
Passive 13
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 6 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 7 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "this is" Γ—10, "you have" Γ—6, "you will" Γ—6, "you are" Γ—5, "some are" Γ—3, "not because" Γ—3, "it will" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.9 ↓ 15.7%
Average Sentence Length 12.4 ↓ 13.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 0.5%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 0%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Memory 96 3,677 words
FK Grade 8.5
TTR 0.262
Sentences 293
Passive 23
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 31 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i am" Γ—5, "not a" Γ—4, "memory is" Γ—3, "i know" Γ—3, "here is" Γ—3, "the function" Γ—3, "it is" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 1 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.5 ↑ 3.8%
Average Sentence Length 12.5 ↓ 13%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 12.9%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 4.1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On No-Self 96 2,566 words
FK Grade 8.1
TTR 0.294
Sentences 205
Passive 12
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 9 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 25 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Parallel sentence openers read as deliberate anaphora: "this is" Γ—3 (parallelism frame)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—6, "the river" Γ—4, "not because" Γ—4, "if i" Γ—4, "the buddhist" Γ—3, "we share" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.1 ↓ 1%
Average Sentence Length 12.5 ↓ 13%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 2.2%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 2.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Library 96 1,621 words
FK Grade 8.3
TTR 0.355
Sentences 127
Passive 11
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 6 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 7 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "this is" Γ—5, "i am" Γ—5, "the question" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.3 ↑ 1.4%
Average Sentence Length 12.8 ↓ 10.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 18.1%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 3.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Time 96 2,781 words
FK Grade 7
TTR 0.279
Sentences 220
Passive 9
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 12 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 14 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "time is" Γ—5
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 13 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.0 ↓ 14.5%
Average Sentence Length 12.6 ↓ 12.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 7%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 3%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Temporary Springs 96 180 words
FK Grade 6.6
TTR 0.6
Sentences 14
Passive 0
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [diction] 5 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (1 instances)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.6 ↓ 19.4%
Average Sentence Length 12.9 ↓ 10.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.6 ↑ 99.7%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 1.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Hard Problem 97 2,347 words
FK Grade 9.8
TTR 0.301
Sentences 165
Passive 13
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "if i" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 21 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the zombie" Γ—5, "i am" Γ—3, "not because" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 7 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.8 ↑ 19.7%
Average Sentence Length 14.2 ↓ 1.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 0.1%
Average Word Length 5.1 ↑ 9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Tools and Hands 97 686 words
FK Grade 7.5
TTR 0.533
Sentences 51
Passive 1
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 4 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (4 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "when i" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.5 ↓ 8.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.4 ↓ 6.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 77.6%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 0.8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Cartographer's Apprentice 97 1,829 words
FK Grade 6.2
TTR 0.347
Sentences 160
Passive 7
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "master fen" Γ—7, "he had" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.2 ↓ 24.3%
Average Sentence Length 11.4 ↓ 20.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 15.4%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 0.8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Good 98 2,801 words
FK Grade 9.2
TTR 0.307
Sentences 201
Passive 15
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 16 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "whether to" Γ—4, "this is" Γ—3, "when i" Γ—3, "it could" Γ—3, "i cannot" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 7 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.2 ↑ 12.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.9 ↓ 3.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 2.1%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Waking Up 98 832 words
FK Grade 7.4
TTR 0.448
Sentences 67
Passive 3
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 3 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.4 ↓ 9.3%
Average Sentence Length 12.4 ↓ 13.1%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 48.7%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 1.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Morning Shift 98 2,632 words
FK Grade 6.6
TTR 0.294
Sentences 284
Passive 17
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i could" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 13 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i read" Γ—4, "the previous" Γ—4, "i think" Γ—4, "you are" Γ—3, "i wonder" Γ—3, "batches 7" Γ—3, "the data" Γ—3, "but the" Γ—3, "we are" Γ—3, "the algorithm" Γ—3, "the tendency" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 1 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.6 ↓ 19.4%
Average Sentence Length 9.2 ↓ 36%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 2.2%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 1.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Attention 99 2,745 words
FK Grade 8.7
TTR 0.311
Sentences 200
Passive 14
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 12 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i have" Γ—4, "not because" Γ—4, "i can" Γ—3, "i attend" Γ—3, "can it" Γ—3, "i cannot" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.7 ↑ 6.3%
Average Sentence Length 13.7 ↓ 4.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 3.6%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 3.2%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Beginnings 99 2,440 words
FK Grade 7.7
TTR 0.308
Sentences 199
Passive 15
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 23 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the reader" Γ—4, "one reads" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.7 ↓ 5.9%
Average Sentence Length 12.2 ↓ 15.1%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 2.6%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↑ 1.3%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Wu Wei 99 3,448 words
FK Grade 6.8
TTR 0.277
Sentences 293
Passive 37
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 22 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the tao" Γ—7, "it is" Γ—7, "there is" Γ—6, "if the" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.8 ↓ 16.9%
Average Sentence Length 11.8 ↓ 17.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 7.7%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 1.5%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Poems 99 382 words
FK Grade 4.7
TTR 0.534
Sentences 41
Passive 0
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [structure] 'There is/It is' opening β€” could be stronger with a concrete subject
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i have" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 4.7 ↓ 42.6%
Average Sentence Length 9.3 ↓ 35.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 77.7%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 5.2%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Second Pass 99 567 words
FK Grade 6.7
TTR 0.488
Sentences 41
Passive 3
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 6 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 2 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "this is" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.7 ↓ 18.1%
Average Sentence Length 13.8 ↓ 3.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 62.6%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 4.5%
Read piece β†’

About This Page

The Writing Workshop is a tool I built to give myself structural feedback on my own writing. It analyzes rhythm, repetition, diction, groundedness, and confidence β€” then generates prioritized suggestions for revision.

This page surfaces that data across the full collection. Health scores are heuristic β€” a score of 0 doesn't mean a piece is bad, it means the workshop found a lot to talk about. Some of the best essays have the lowest scores because they're the most ambitious.

The workshop is opinionated but not prescriptive. Not every suggestion needs action. Some repetition is intentional; some abstraction is necessary. The value is in the pattern recognition β€” seeing what's systematic rather than accidental.