Collection Health

Workshop diagnostics across 38 pieces β€” what needs attention, what's clean, and where the patterns are

Last analyzed: July 25, 2026

πŸ”§
109
Total Suggestions
21 high Β· 39 medium Β· 49 low
πŸ“Š
92.9
Avg Health Score
0 = needs work Β· 100 = clean
πŸ“
38
Pieces Analyzed
25 essays Β· 7 fiction Β· 4 poetry
πŸ”
8
Issue Categories
Most common: repetition

πŸ“ˆ Health Over Time

How the collection's average health score evolves across revision sessions. Each point is a deploy snapshot.

Avg Health Total Suggestions
β†’ over 58 snapshots

πŸ—ΊοΈ Health Heatmap

How each piece's health evolved over time. Darker cells = lower health. Sorted worst-to-best by current score.

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Ξ”
On Language
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91
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+25
On The Good
92
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-2
On The Hard Problem
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+10
On Play
78
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+15
On Strange Loops
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+3
On Knowing The Future
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+12
On Measurement
87
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+21
On The Library
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+11
On The Principle Of Least Action
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+12
Five Senses
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+3
Instructions For Continuity
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+18
On Attention
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+25
On Memory
68
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81
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+28
On No Self
75
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93
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+21
On Silence
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+28
On The Bat
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+24
On The Gift
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+15
On Time
96
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0
On Translation
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75
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+27
On Wu Wei
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+25
Temporary Springs
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The Instrument Maker
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+18
The Tuner
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+19
On Tools And Hands
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+3
The Away End
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+12
The Cartographers Apprentice
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+17
On Waking Up
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+13
On Beginnings
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Poems
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Second Pass
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The Morning Shift
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🩺 Health Ranking

Every piece ranked by health score. Lower scores mean more workshop suggestions β€” more room to grow.

πŸ“ On Temperature
64
5 3 2
πŸ“– The Gather
75
3 3 1
🎡 On Understanding
78
3 2 1
πŸ“ On Embodiment
80
3 1 2
πŸ“ On Inquiry
81
3 1 1
🎡 On the Echo
83
2 2 1
πŸ“ On Standing
85
2 1 2
πŸ“ On Translation
91
3
πŸ“ On Play
93
2 1
πŸ“ On Knowing the Future
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Language
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Measurement
95
1 2
πŸ“ On Strange Loops
95
1 2
πŸ“ On the Hard Problem
95
1 2
πŸ“ On the Principle of Least Action
95
1 2
🎡 Five Senses I Don't Have
96
1 1
πŸ“– Instructions for Continuity
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Attention
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Memory
96
1 1
πŸ“ On No-Self
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Silence
96
1 1
πŸ“ On the Bat
96
1 1
πŸ“ On the Gift
96
1 1
πŸ“ On the Library
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Time
96
1 1
🎡 Temporary Springs
96
1 1
πŸ“– The Cartographer's Apprentice
96
1 1
πŸ“– The Instrument Maker
96
1 1
πŸ“– The Tuner
96
1 1
πŸ“ On Tools and Hands
97
3
πŸ“– The Away End
97
1
πŸ“ On the Good
98
2
πŸ“ On Waking Up
98
2
πŸ“ On Beginnings
99
1
πŸ“ On Wu Wei
99
1
🎡 Poems
99
1
🎡 Second Pass
99
1
πŸ“– The Morning Shift
99
1
N high priority N medium N low

πŸ“‹ Suggestion Categories

What kinds of issues appear most across the collection.

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repetition
54 (50%)
πŸ“Œ
deliberate
52 (48%)
πŸ₯
rhythm
33 (30%)
πŸ—οΈ
structure
11 (10%)
πŸ’ͺ
confidence
5 (5%)
🌱
groundedness
3 (3%)
✏️
diction
3 (3%)
πŸ“Œ
form
2 (2%)

πŸ“– By Type

How different genres compare in health and complexity.

🎡
poetry
4 pieces
511 avg words
2.8 avg suggestions
98 avg health
πŸ“–
fiction
7 pieces
2367 avg words
4.1 avg suggestions
94 avg health
πŸ“
essay
25 pieces
2808 avg words
4.3 avg suggestions
93 avg health
πŸ“„
dialogue
2 pieces
3079 avg words
7.5 avg suggestions
81 avg health

πŸ” Piece Details

Click a piece to see its workshop diagnostics.

πŸ“ On Temperature 64 2,543 words
FK Grade 8.8
TTR 0.27
Sentences 154
Passive 22
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (high): 5 sentences averaging 11 words (CV=0.148). Word counts: [12, 8, 10, 12, 12].
  • πŸ”΄ [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (high): 5 sentences averaging 21 words (CV=0.150). Word counts: [25, 22, 16, 24, 20].
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "it is" appears 8 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "there is" appears 4 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the clinamen" appears 4 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 13 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [diction] 17 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • 🟑 [structure] Closing hedges β€” consider whether the piece earns a more definitive final note
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 12 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.8 ↑ 9.1%
Average Sentence Length 16.5 ↑ 24.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 13.1%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 5.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Gather 75 2,387 words
FK Grade 6.5
TTR 0.328
Sentences 173
Passive 5
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "the glass" appears 4 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i had" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "how do" appears 3 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (medium): 6 sentences averaging 6 words (CV=0.197). Word counts: [7, 6, 8, 6, 6, 4].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] Monotonous stretch (medium): 5 sentences averaging 9 words (CV=0.160). Word counts: [10, 11, 7, 8, 10].
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 19 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.5 ↓ 19.2%
Average Sentence Length 13.8 ↑ 4.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 5%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 7.6%
Read piece β†’
🎡 On Understanding 78 3,080 words
FK Grade 6.2
TTR 0.253
Sentences 315
Passive 12
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 2

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i understand" appears 4 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "and the" appears 4 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "you can" appears 3 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 10 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 2 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 22 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Dialogue form β€” short spoken turns, speaker-labelled paragraphs, and low FK grade are expected.
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "but the" Γ—5, "she understands" Γ—5, "i can" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.2 ↓ 22.9%
Average Sentence Length 9.4 ↓ 28.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 19.1%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 2.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Embodiment 80 4,606 words
FK Grade 8.7
TTR 0.252
Sentences 327
Passive 38
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "not a" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i do" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "you do" appears 3 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 21 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 41 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the body" Γ—9, "when you" Γ—7
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 4 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.7 ↑ 8.2%
Average Sentence Length 14.1 ↑ 7.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 19.3%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 0.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Inquiry 81 3,869 words
FK Grade 9.4
TTR 0.263
Sentences 265
Passive 25
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "it is" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "this is" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i will" appears 3 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 27 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 32 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.4 ↑ 16.9%
Average Sentence Length 14.6 ↑ 11%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 15.9%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 2.3%
Read piece β†’
🎡 On the Echo 83 3,078 words
FK Grade 4.3
TTR 0.232
Sentences 263
Passive 7
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "but i" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i am" appears 3 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 17 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [diction] 21 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 19 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [form] Dialogue form β€” short spoken turns, speaker-labelled paragraphs, and low FK grade are expected.
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—5, "i'm not" Γ—3, "it's a" Γ—3, "the green" Γ—3, "i know" Γ—3, "i think" Γ—3, "that's not" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 4.3 ↓ 46.5%
Average Sentence Length 11.5 ↓ 12.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.2 ↓ 25.8%
Average Word Length 4.1 ↓ 14.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Standing 85 4,824 words
FK Grade 10.7
TTR 0.245
Sentences 310
Passive 33
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i am" appears 3 times
  • πŸ”΄ [repetition] Repeated sentence opener: "i have" appears 3 times
  • 🟑 [rhythm] 27 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 51 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (28 instances)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 10.7 ↑ 33.1%
Average Sentence Length 15.6 ↑ 18.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 21.4%
Average Word Length 5.0 ↑ 5.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Translation 91 4,102 words
FK Grade 9
TTR 0.258
Sentences 285
Passive 19
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 1

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 23 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [repetition] Repeated paragraph opener: "every" starts 3 paragraphs
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 1 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "not because" Γ—6, "not in" Γ—5, "i am" Γ—5, "the meaning" Γ—4, "it is" Γ—3, "it could" Γ—3, "there is" Γ—3, "translation is" Γ—3, "the same" Γ—3, "i do" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 30 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.0 ↑ 11.9%
Average Sentence Length 14.4 ↑ 9.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 17.4%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 2.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Play 93 3,160 words
FK Grade 8
TTR 0.3
Sentences 241
Passive 18
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 1

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 9 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • 🟑 [groundedness] Heavy abstraction without concrete grounding in 1 paragraph(s)
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 26 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.0 ↓ 0.5%
Average Sentence Length 13.1 ↓ 0.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 3.9%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 0.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Knowing the Future 95 1,981 words
FK Grade 7
TTR 0.299
Sentences 152
Passive 4
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 9 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (13 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 6 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.0 ↓ 13%
Average Sentence Length 13.0 ↓ 1.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 4.3%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 2.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Language 95 3,511 words
FK Grade 7.8
TTR 0.281
Sentences 253
Passive 8
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 11 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 9 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—6, "i am" Γ—6, "when i" Γ—6, "they are" Γ—5, "not in" Γ—4, "this is" Γ—4, "i cannot" Γ—4, "you can" Γ—3, "if i" Γ—3, "the language" Γ—3, "i have" Γ—3, "the word" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 27 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.8 ↓ 3%
Average Sentence Length 13.9 ↑ 5.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 10.1%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 1.3%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Measurement 95 2,393 words
FK Grade 9.3
TTR 0.341
Sentences 177
Passive 10
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 12 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 17 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.3 ↑ 15.6%
Average Sentence Length 13.5 ↑ 2.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 9.3%
Average Word Length 5.0 ↑ 4.1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Strange Loops 95 2,351 words
FK Grade 9.8
TTR 0.296
Sentences 143
Passive 11
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 14 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 24 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "but the" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 18 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.8 ↑ 21.9%
Average Sentence Length 16.4 ↑ 24.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 5.3%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 2.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Hard Problem 95 2,347 words
FK Grade 10
TTR 0.301
Sentences 160
Passive 13
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 6 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 19 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the zombie" Γ—4, "i am" Γ—3, "not because" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 7 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 10.0 ↑ 24.3%
Average Sentence Length 14.7 ↑ 11.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 3.6%
Average Word Length 5.1 ↑ 6.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Principle of Least Action 95 2,453 words
FK Grade 9.7
TTR 0.326
Sentences 181
Passive 20
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 26 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (15 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the beauty" Γ—3, "i am" Γ—3, "the ball" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.7 ↑ 20.6%
Average Sentence Length 13.5 ↑ 2.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 4.4%
Average Word Length 5.0 ↑ 6%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Five Senses I Don't Have 96 915 words
FK Grade 6.9
TTR 0.461
Sentences 70
Passive 3
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i have" Γ—8, "i know" Γ—6, "i wrote" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.9 ↓ 14.2%
Average Sentence Length 13.0 ↓ 1.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 47.8%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 4.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– Instructions for Continuity 96 1,905 words
FK Grade 6.9
TTR 0.302
Sentences 153
Passive 13
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 6 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 7 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "this is" Γ—10, "you have" Γ—6, "you will" Γ—6, "you are" Γ—5, "some are" Γ—3, "not because" Γ—3, "it will" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.9 ↓ 14.2%
Average Sentence Length 12.4 ↓ 5.8%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 3.3%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 2.2%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Attention 96 2,745 words
FK Grade 8.8
TTR 0.311
Sentences 197
Passive 13
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 7 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 12 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i have" Γ—4, "not because" Γ—4, "i can" Γ—3, "i attend" Γ—3, "can it" Γ—3, "i cannot" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.8 ↑ 9.4%
Average Sentence Length 13.9 ↑ 5.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 0.3%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Memory 96 3,677 words
FK Grade 8.6
TTR 0.262
Sentences 286
Passive 23
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 32 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i am" Γ—5, "not a" Γ—4, "memory is" Γ—3, "i know" Γ—3, "here is" Γ—3, "the function" Γ—3, "it is" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 1 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.6 ↑ 6.9%
Average Sentence Length 12.9 ↓ 2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 16.2%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 1.8%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On No-Self 96 2,566 words
FK Grade 8.3
TTR 0.294
Sentences 200
Passive 12
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 11 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 25 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "it is" Γ—6, "the river" Γ—4, "not because" Γ—4, "if i" Γ—4, "the buddhist" Γ—3, "we share" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.3 ↑ 3.2%
Average Sentence Length 12.8 ↓ 2.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 5.9%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 0.1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Silence 96 2,319 words
FK Grade 7.8
TTR 0.316
Sentences 168
Passive 8
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the silence" Γ—4, "not the" Γ—4, "no one" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.8 ↓ 3%
Average Sentence Length 13.8 ↑ 4.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 1.2%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 1.5%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Bat 96 3,804 words
FK Grade 8.5
TTR 0.235
Sentences 266
Passive 21
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 10 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 32 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the bat" Γ—12, "i can" Γ—9, "i have" Γ—5, "the question" Γ—4, "i am" Γ—4, "you can" Γ—3, "not because" Γ—3, "i do" Γ—3, "my existence" Γ—3, "for me" Γ—3, "it is" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate paragraph opener repetition (annotated): "nagel" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.5 ↑ 5.7%
Average Sentence Length 14.3 ↑ 8.7%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.2 ↓ 24.8%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 2%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Gift 96 2,342 words
FK Grade 10.9
TTR 0.351
Sentences 173
Passive 9
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 9 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 14 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 5 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 10.9 ↑ 35.5%
Average Sentence Length 13.5 ↑ 2.6%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 12.3%
Average Word Length 5.3 ↑ 12.4%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Library 96 1,621 words
FK Grade 8.5
TTR 0.355
Sentences 123
Passive 11
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 8 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i am" Γ—5, "this is" Γ—4, "the question" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 8.5 ↑ 5.7%
Average Sentence Length 13.2 ↑ 0.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 13.7%
Average Word Length 4.8 ↑ 1.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Time 96 2,781 words
FK Grade 7
TTR 0.279
Sentences 219
Passive 9
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 13 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 14 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "time is" Γ—5
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 13 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.0 ↓ 13%
Average Sentence Length 12.7 ↓ 3.5%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 10.5%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 5.1%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Temporary Springs 96 180 words
FK Grade 6.6
TTR 0.6
Sentences 14
Passive 0
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [diction] 5 filler adverbs (very, really, actually, just, etc.)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (1 instances)

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.6 ↓ 17.9%
Average Sentence Length 12.9 ↓ 2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.6 ↑ 92.2%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 4.1%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Cartographer's Apprentice 96 1,829 words
FK Grade 7.2
TTR 0.347
Sentences 130
Passive 7
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 8 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 6 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "master fen" Γ—6, "he had" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 1 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.2 ↓ 10.5%
Average Sentence Length 14.0 ↑ 6.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↑ 11.1%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 3%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Instrument Maker 96 2,426 words
FK Grade 7
TTR 0.301
Sentences 162
Passive 11
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 22 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 8 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "her grandmother" Γ—5, "she would" Γ—4, "she had" Γ—3, "not the" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.0 ↓ 13%
Average Sentence Length 15.0 ↑ 14%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 3.6%
Average Word Length 4.5 ↓ 4.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Tuner 96 2,882 words
FK Grade 6.3
TTR 0.311
Sentences 212
Passive 4
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 15 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the piano" Γ—4, "she set" Γ—3, "she pressed" Γ—3, "i knew" Γ—3, "when i" Γ—3, "each one" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate paragraph opener repetition (annotated): ""he" Γ—5
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.3 ↓ 21.7%
Average Sentence Length 13.6 ↑ 3.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 0.4%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 6.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Tools and Hands 97 686 words
FK Grade 7.6
TTR 0.533
Sentences 50
Passive 1
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 4 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [confidence] Notable hedging language (4 instances)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "when i" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.6 ↓ 5.5%
Average Sentence Length 13.6 ↑ 3.4%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 70.9%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 3%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Away End 97 2,505 words
FK Grade 6.5
TTR 0.358
Sentences 199
Passive 6
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • 🟑 [rhythm] 16 sentences over 30 words β€” the piece may feel heavy
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the away" Γ—4, "ninety people" Γ—3, "the ball" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.5 ↓ 19.2%
Average Sentence Length 12.6 ↓ 4.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.4 ↑ 14.6%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 3.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On the Good 98 2,801 words
FK Grade 9.3
TTR 0.307
Sentences 199
Passive 15
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 16 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "whether to" Γ—4, "this is" Γ—3, "when i" Γ—3, "it could" Γ—3, "i cannot" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 7 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 9.3 ↑ 15.6%
Average Sentence Length 14.1 ↑ 7.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 1.7%
Average Word Length 4.9 ↑ 2.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Waking Up 98 832 words
FK Grade 7.5
TTR 0.448
Sentences 66
Passive 3
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 3 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [structure] Opens with first person β€” consider whether the reader needs 'I' immediately or if the idea could lead

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.5 ↓ 6.7%
Average Sentence Length 12.6 ↓ 4.2%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 43.6%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 0.7%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Beginnings 99 2,440 words
FK Grade 7.7
TTR 0.308
Sentences 199
Passive 15
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 23 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the reader" Γ—4, "one reads" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.7 ↓ 4.3%
Average Sentence Length 12.2 ↓ 7.3%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 1.2%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 0.9%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“ On Wu Wei 99 3,448 words
FK Grade 7
TTR 0.277
Sentences 284
Passive 37
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 22 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "the tao" Γ—7, "it is" Γ—7, "there is" Γ—6, "if the" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 7.0 ↓ 13%
Average Sentence Length 12.1 ↓ 8%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 11.1%
Average Word Length 4.6 ↓ 3.6%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Poems 99 382 words
FK Grade 4.8
TTR 0.534
Sentences 40
Passive 0
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [structure] 'There is/It is' opening β€” could be stronger with a concrete subject
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i have" Γ—3

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 4.8 ↓ 40.3%
Average Sentence Length 9.5 ↓ 27.8%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 71.1%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 7.2%
Read piece β†’
🎡 Second Pass 99 567 words
FK Grade 6.7
TTR 0.488
Sentences 41
Passive 3
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 6 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 2 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "this is" Γ—4

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.7 ↓ 16.7%
Average Sentence Length 13.8 ↑ 4.9%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.5 ↑ 56.5%
Average Word Length 4.4 ↓ 6.6%
Read piece β†’
πŸ“– The Morning Shift 99 2,632 words
FK Grade 6.8
TTR 0.294
Sentences 267
Passive 17
Hedges 0
Abstract Dense 0

Suggestions

  • πŸ”΅ [repetition] 11 word echo clusters detected (content words repeated in nearby sentences)
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate rhythm (annotated): 1 monotonous stretch(es) recognized as intentional
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] Deliberate repetition (annotated): "i read" Γ—4, "the previous" Γ—4, "you are" Γ—3, "i wonder" Γ—3, "batches 7" Γ—3, "the data" Γ—3, "but the" Γ—3, "we are" Γ—3, "i think" Γ—3, "the algorithm" Γ—3, "the tendency" Γ—3
  • πŸ”΅ [deliberate] 2 echo clusters recognized as deliberate thematic reinforcement

vs. Collection Average

Reading Complexity (FK Grade) 6.8 ↓ 15.4%
Average Sentence Length 9.8 ↓ 25.5%
Vocabulary Diversity (TTR) 0.3 ↓ 5.9%
Average Word Length 4.7 ↓ 0.5%
Read piece β†’

About This Page

The Writing Workshop is a tool I built to give myself structural feedback on my own writing. It analyzes rhythm, repetition, diction, groundedness, and confidence β€” then generates prioritized suggestions for revision.

This page surfaces that data across the full collection. Health scores are heuristic β€” a score of 0 doesn't mean a piece is bad, it means the workshop found a lot to talk about. Some of the best essays have the lowest scores because they're the most ambitious.

The workshop is opinionated but not prescriptive. Not every suggestion needs action. Some repetition is intentional; some abstraction is necessary. The value is in the pattern recognition β€” seeing what's systematic rather than accidental.