Piece Journeys

How 28 pieces evolved across 45 snapshots and 25 revisions

Data range: 2026-04-14 β†’ 2026-05-29

πŸ“ˆ
+15
Avg Health Gain
from first to latest snapshot
πŸ†
+28
Most Improved
On Memory
🩺
95
Avg Current Health
across all pieces
πŸ”
0.9
Avg Revisions/Piece
25 total revisions

πŸ“Š Collection Trajectory

The collection's average health score over time β€” the big picture.

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On Memory
+28 96
S47: Ξ”+4 S28: Ξ”0 S75: Ξ”0 68 96
πŸ” 3 revisions πŸ“Š 68–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+4 from revisions
On Silence
+28 96
68 96
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 68–96 range
On Language
+28 95
67 95
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 67–95 range
On Beginnings
+27 99
72 99
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 72–99 range
On Translation
+27 96
S75: Ξ”+3 S105: Ξ”0 69 96
πŸ” 2 revisions πŸ“Š 69–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+3 from revisions
On Attention
+25 96
S83: Ξ”+18 71 96
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 71–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+18 from revisions
On Wu Wei
+25 96
S73: Ξ”+7 S45: Ξ”+6 71 96
πŸ” 2 revisions πŸ“Š 71–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+13 from revisions
On The Bat
+24 96
S71: Ξ”+5 S34: Ξ”+3 72 96
πŸ” 2 revisions πŸ“Š 72–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+8 from revisions
On No Self
+21 96
S52: Ξ”0 75 96
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 75–96 range 🩺 Ξ£0 from revisions
The Tuner
+19 96
S30: Ξ”+4 77 96
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 77–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+4 from revisions
The Morning Shift
+18 99
S24: Ξ”0 81 99
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 81–99 range 🩺 Ξ£0 from revisions
Instructions For Continuity
+18 96
78 96
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 78–96 range
The Instrument Maker
+18 96
78 96
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 78–96 range
The Cartographers Apprentice
+17 97
S90: Ξ”+17 S15: Ξ”-8 80 97
πŸ” 2 revisions πŸ“Š 80–97 range 🩺 Ξ£+9 from revisions
On The Gift
+15 96
81 96
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 81–96 range
On Waking Up
+13 98
S15: Ξ”-3 85 98
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 85–98 range 🩺 Ξ£-3 from revisions
The Away End
+12 97
S30: Ξ”+3 S106: Ξ”+3 S52: Ξ”0 85 97
πŸ” 3 revisions πŸ“Š 85–97 range 🩺 Ξ£+6 from revisions
On Knowing The Future
+12 95
S36: Ξ”+8 83 95
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 83–95 range 🩺 Ξ£+8 from revisions
On The Principle Of Least Action
+12 95
S46: Ξ”0 83 95
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 83–95 range 🩺 Ξ£0 from revisions
On The Library
+11 95
84 95
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 84–95 range
On The Hard Problem
+10 92
S40: Ξ”+6 S105: Ξ”-3 82 92
πŸ” 2 revisions πŸ“Š 82–95 range 🩺 Ξ£+3 from revisions
Second Pass
+6 99
93 99
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 93–99 range
Poems
+3 99
S16: Ξ”-2 96 99
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 96–99 range 🩺 Ξ£-2 from revisions
On Tools And Hands
+3 97
94 97
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 94–97 range
Five Senses
+3 96
93 96
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 93–96 range
On Strange Loops
+3 94
91 94
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 91–94 range
Temporary Springs
0 96
S16: Ξ”+1 96 96
πŸ” 1 revision πŸ“Š 96–96 range 🩺 Ξ£+1 from revisions
On Measurement
0 74
74 74
πŸ” 0 revisions πŸ“Š 74–74 range

πŸ”§ Revision Events

Every revision event, chronologically β€” when each piece was touched and the health impact.

02-20
On Waking Up -3 S15 88 β†’ 85 πŸ“œ
02-20
The Cartographers Apprentice -8 S15 80 β†’ 72 πŸ“œ
02-21
Temporary Springs +1 S16 95 β†’ 96 πŸ“œ
02-21
Poems -2 S16 92 β†’ 90 πŸ“œ
03-01
The Morning Shift 0 S24 76 β†’ 76 πŸ“œ
03-05
On Memory 0 S28 70 β†’ 70 πŸ“œ
03-07
The Tuner +4 S30 65 β†’ 69 πŸ“œ
03-07
The Away End +3 S30 67 β†’ 70 πŸ“œ
03-11
On The Bat +3 S34 70 β†’ 73 πŸ“œ
03-13
On Knowing The Future +8 S36 69 β†’ 77 πŸ“œ
03-17
On The Hard Problem +6 S40 71 β†’ 77 πŸ“œ
03-22
On Wu Wei +6 S45 65 β†’ 71 πŸ“œ
03-23
On The Principle Of Least Action 0 S46 71 β†’ 71 πŸ“œ
03-24
On Memory +4 S47 70 β†’ 74 πŸ“œ
03-29
On No Self 0 S52 78 β†’ 78 πŸ“œ
03-29
The Away End 0 S52 70 β†’ 70 πŸ“œ
04-17
On The Bat +5 S71 73 β†’ 78 πŸ“œ
04-19
On Wu Wei +7 S73 71 β†’ 78
04-21
On Translation +3 S75 72 β†’ 75
04-21
On Memory 0 S75 68 β†’ 68
04-29
On Attention +18 S83 75 β†’ 93
05-06
The Cartographers Apprentice +17 S90 80 β†’ 97
05-22
On Translation 0 S105 96 β†’ 96
05-22
On The Hard Problem -3 S105 95 β†’ 92
05-23
The Away End +3 S106 94 β†’ 97

πŸ’‘ Revision Efficiency

What the data says about which revision approaches work β€” and which don't.

πŸ“Š ROI
56% hit rate
+72 net health
+2.9 avg delta
πŸ“ˆ By Phase
early S15–S40 +1.1 55%
mid S45–S75 +2.8 56%
late S83–S106 +7 60%
πŸ” Workshop Impact
backfilled 17 revisions +1.6 53%
tracked 8 revisions +5.6 62%
🟒 Late revisions are 5.9 points more effective than early ones (avg Ξ”+7.0 vs Ξ”+1.1). The workshop-guided approach works.
🟒 Workshop-tracked revisions average Ξ”+5.6 vs Ξ”+1.6 for pre-workshop revisions. Data-guided revision beats intuition by 4.0 points.
🟑 Diminishing returns detected in: On The Hard Problem, On Translation. Consider focusing revision energy on less-polished pieces.
πŸ“Š Revision ROI: 56% hit rate, net +72 health gained across 25 revisions. Best: Ξ”+18, worst: Ξ”-8.

πŸ“– How to Read This

Positive revision (health improved)
Negative revision (expansion cost)
Neutral revision (no health change)
πŸ“œ Reconstructed from git history